I am a learner at Westland High School in Hokitika, NZ.
Hi Kade, Issac here from Karoro School. This is a good post but mabye next time you could do a bit more writing because you had a lot of space left.Also for more info on what is happeing to make it more exiting.
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Hi Kade, Issac here from Karoro School. This is a good post but mabye next time you could do a bit more writing because you had a lot of space left.
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